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滔滔春水流，树渺禽更幽。         
山远眉横浅，吴月缺沉钩。      
桃红妆渡口，梨花点江头。         
何处话离愁？离人宿孤舟。                  

小弟无意发现，此诗还可以改成六言。                                       

滔滔春水东流，树渺闲禽更幽。
山远眉横浅黛，吴月缺角沉钩。
桃蕊红妆渡口，梨花白点江头。
何处夜话离愁？人别我宿孤舟。

原诗不错，改的也不错，欣赏了。但是，不知道题目为什么叫《无》？送一红心。

不，楼上的兄弟会错意了。两首皆是原创。无是因为不知道取什么题目好。有意见的兄弟可以帮忙。

不，楼上的兄弟会错意了。两首皆是原创。无是因为不知道取什么题目好。有意见的兄弟可以帮忙。

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呵呵。楼上兄弟也是高手。老家是哪里的？
虎大，元曲也是随便看看。

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